HA! Amazing. ok, good step forward. Lets keep digging --- what dies Even want? Like yes he has been sent out there to get them to leave. He wants to keep his job, but why does he stay?
Why dies Jasper bring up the whole sister thing? What does he want from even there - what's he doing?
Does KJ really think that they are allowed?
KJ and Jasper are both trying to have a good day - that is kinda what they always want. How does this maniest in their tactics?
I really liked the use of the backgrounds. Seeing the place that they were sitting helped me to understand the scene better because I did not have to imagine what the place they were at was like. I also liked Gabby's visualization of her character.
HA! Amazing. ok, good step forward. Lets keep digging --- what dies Even want? Like yes he has been sent out there to get them to leave. He wants to keep his job, but why does he stay?
Why dies Jasper bring up the whole sister thing? What does he want from even there - what's he doing?
Does KJ really think that they are allowed?
KJ and Jasper are both trying to have a good day - that is kinda what they always want. How does this maniest in their tactics?
This is going to be a fun scene!
The background really helps me visualize the scene. You guys did good with the characters too and their attitudes towards each other.
I really liked the use of the backgrounds. Seeing the place that they were sitting helped me to understand the scene better because I did not have to imagine what the place they were at was like. I also liked Gabby's visualization of her character.